All Comments on 'A Hole In One!'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hot, hot, hot

Excellent story... very hot and well written... thanks for sharing.

LordmikelLordmikelover 16 years ago
Good except

This line "shoot my spunk into your cunt" came from left field. Seemed out of place.

chilleywilleychilleywilleyover 11 years ago
supurb

First of your stuff I've read. Excellent! Bit long on the golf lead in, but then I'm not a golfer so I'm not quite the market.

Chilleywilley .

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