All Comments on 'A Hope in Hell'

woo awesome story! well written and the depression/monopolar theme was very interesting (someone in my family has bipolar).

Ok my title wasn't as cool as "monopoles exist in nature," but was the best I could come up with as I fall asleep this evening.

Loved the story, very intelligently written and well done.

This has got to be the strangest version of "The Devil and Daniel Webster" I've ever read, but hot damn if it wasn't a great read. Well done!

Really well written, and nicely textured -- as are all your stories. Thanks for writing it.

And if I may ask, what's the Might Have Been series?

Might Have Been was my first set of stories on the site. Due to the good reception and feedback, I turned it into a novel and pulled the stories from Lit. Links to the novel are available from my author page on Lit.

emotional and sexy.=), I truly did love it.

Your stories make this site worthwhile.

...and it's still my all-time favourite erotic novel. I love the extra stories you've written around the edges, especially this one. Well done!

Really good. You 'get' people, and story.

But with a few messages about not focusing on yourself.

This was actually a really good read for a short story. Not many spelling/grammatical errors that I could find or found detrimental, and over all it was an interesting read for how hokey it was. Kept my attention from start to finish, so good job!

Nice to see Tasha turn it around. I like the way you seem to know quite a bit about depression and deeply codependent relationships. I am afraid I have personal experience with them as well and your stories resonate with me on a very deep level.

Bravo ,very fine work. You could be a professional writer.:O

This is phenomenal work !I have read a lot of stuff and this will remain one of my most liked ones !lobednthe treatment,characterisations

I have a huge fetish for sexfigjts written well with interesting characterisations ! And you have delivered it !

Would love to see you write an girl on girl trindight sexfight with the same characters

I loved the treatment and the buildup .I would love to see you write an girl on girl awxfight too with tribbing in the same universe that you have chosen

this is the first time porn has made me cry 🤷‍♂️

5*

I lived for many years in a world similar to Natasha's. Thank you for a kind, genuine treatment of a darkness filled with despair and desperation.

Much of her story is mine. In my case, venlafaxine was the antidepressant that offered a second chance at life. I wish Natasha all the best and encourage her to stay the course until she finds the antidepressant that works with her body chemistry.