All Comments on 'A is for Anal'

Oh yeah this one got me rockin and wiggling and well ok lots more....To watch from the doorway and then be invited in...got me to thinking *ewg*...what lines in the sand would I cross?

Now I expect to see you complete the alphabet this week!

Great work and great to see you back at it. I too expect to see the rest of the alphabet, but I'll give you more time than Bear.:)

e-mail B came in just as I was finishing this one... oh yeah... great having you back and writing up a storm Mr. Featherman short, believable and sweet..

Hot, hot, hot, hot oh my god, i was ashtonished when i read it. The rithm is impressive. it´s like the charge of the light brigade. Once you start, you can only go faster.

I am looking forward to learning the alphabet all over again MF style... I understand you have a picture thread for further study?

Yum yum, great story, I'd love to fuck those two!

Great story, many feathersj, loved the detail & characters.

That's hhhhhhhot!

It's great but you switch characters back and forth, first Rachel is Jackie then vice versa etc etc, same with Brian and Jerry. Still hot though

one of the best I have read. I could almost feel my cock going into that ass

Intense story. I loved it thoroughly. Got a little tough to read when the laptop got in the way of my arousal. Can't wait to read more.

my wife and i just read this hot story she is going to get up the ass tonite am i going to make her scream

You are a sick asshole.

yes a good tale, but as said before, you tended to mix the characters up a bit, however i feel that jackie/ rachael who had reasonable morals, gave her first anal sex a little too easily, i enjoyed it though.

Very hot! Love your writing. I lost my anal cherry in a three-some myself, so many years ago.

lot of anal and vaginal sex, but any girl that tried anal would never stop it

Way overwritten, too many adjectives and redundant descriptions -- often, less is more.

Not a line in sight!

Great story. A trifecta: in the ass, multiple partners and eating a woman. What more could a girl ask for? Very well thought out and written. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Great story! My only complaint in this story, and so far every one I've read of yours, there is nothing erotic in using the word 'cunt'. It is too derogatory to be considered erotic. I'm constantly having to change it to get more eroticism in the story.

You're a very good writer but could be even better, with proper use of the eroticism words.