All Comments on 'A Journey in the Amazon'

Boring

Well writtem and believable look forward to more :)

I loved the way the wife was pummeled! Best part hands down! Made me fantasize about my wife in the same disposition :D

Keep on writing mate!

Original, nice development of the tribe culture with plenty of interesting elements intertwining. The message from the gods was also a very good way to end out of there, and two wives giving David multiple children was the perfect way to show the lingering affect of the adventure on David. Five stars

This "one" statement says it all about his "faithful" wife!!

The fact is she's just another Literotica SLUT pretending to be a loving, devoted, "faithful" wife! After a couple of rounds with the chief, she becomes a cheating, whore & a cum dump willing to spread open her "slimy" cunt for whatever cock happens to "cum" along. One moment a lady ... the next a Tramp! If her husband knows what good for him, he'll take up with Kauya and leave the "fuck toy" wife in the jungle with the horny natives to be "bred" like the cow she is!

A bit too long, but a dang good story.

Semi good fucking but...... WAY TOO LONG with A LOT of unnecessary "daily" stuff.

but it's a well-written tale.

I want to see a continuation of this! Perhaps another couple coming to this tribe or another tribe. :D

continue with this story is damn good one, perhaps let the couple return and continue the sex life of Amanda with the chieftain or another tribes member

Excellent and interesting story. Well written.

I was thinking you should make the same story, etc but all in the wife's point of view.

Loved it. write more stories....and write this one from the wife's viewpoint!!

The best story what I found to read ever. Thanks a lot!

Thank you for posting this story. It was the kind of wife sharing story that I go for. Very hot situation and premise with the wife and chief, though I for one am glad that the husband made it out ok despite the predicament as well.

I hope you feel inspired to write a chapter 2. I would love to read it!

like another commented above, would like to this from the wife's perspective

This is the second time l have read this story. I find it well written and creative.

The artist cheese-ter did commissioned comic pages to go along with this story. See below:

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Et2bruttus/365248/Commission-Taken-by-Amazon-Tribe-1-by-cheese-ter

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Et2bruttus/365862/Commission-Taken-by-Amazon-Tribe-2-by-cheese-ter

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Et2bruttus/365900/Commission-Taken-by-Amazon-Tribe-3-by-cheese-ter

I saw on another site that you were writing a longer version of this story. When will it be published?

Like others, I too found it to be a little long-winded.

I'm not sure of the overall appeal to this type of story. A driving point in cuckold fantasy is being dominated by a superior male. When the MC is described as athletic, capable, and standing quite tall among the runty tribesmen (even the chief is described as beneath his stature) it's hard to get into it.

A bunch of little men held a spear to the MC's throat while a slightly larger man had his way with his wife. Why the little "goblins" didn't have their heads crushed after the first day, I'll never know.

Started off really hot and exciting 10/10 as it went on dropped in excitement a bit for me but was well written

This is by far my favourite story on litrotica I really wish there were similar stories but this comes closest to what I’m looking for.

I hope the artist keeps writing

What a great story, well written for enjoyment! Thank you ! Dinomagick

Great story! This author has real talent and I hope they keep writing.

I really found what I was looking for with this one I haven’t found anything this good anywhere else I really wish I could see more stories like this one

Dinomagick is a true artist.

I wish Dinomagick would get back to writing again, especially since they said they would be writing a sequel to this. It's one of my favorite erotic stories on the internet.