All Comments on 'A Kind of Homecoming'

Very well written. I was shocked that her father shot himself.

Very sad and profound. In a strange kind of way, i enjoyed it. A very well writen piece.

I've been reading a lot of stories on this site in the last three days, since I signed up. Your story is the first one I wanted to comment on. I am near tears from reading your story. It was sad and erotic. Good job with the emotion you provoked. It was also well written. Congratulations. OH and when I realized the father shot himself that was the words I said "OH Jesus!"

that was an amazing story and not one i thought would end like that.,...great writing....and the end was nicely put to rest

Well written story and thoughtful.

This story was definetly not what I expected. That's really messed up and it's somewhat makes sense, and doesn't!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story...Thanks...

Not a good story. I was horny and now I'm not

The story was too much for me. I deal with too much trajedy in my job.

I often can't leave my work at work and . That's all I can say, sorry

What the fuck. 10/10.

Echoing another. WHAT THE FUCK!

Written well enough have to give you that.

Certainly original and different.

Way to dark though should have come with a warning cause it just killed the mood one usually looks for here.

Aside from that there is so much more implied story could go on.

What an utterly ducked up story. Well executed, for what was there, buT also Completely lacking in other important details

Stupid