All Comments on 'A Kiss Between Friends'

Well written. 5 Stars

it was really rushed at the end so it made it sound weird

I thought it was a great story. Being friends but wanting more, but also afraid of the awkwardness if the other doesn't feel the same way....I think a lot of people have been there.

One note though. On page one her name is Eve then it changes to Amy. But other than that I say keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed your story. A wonderful romance. Excellent effort for a first time submission.

Very sweet romantic story. Ending happened a little too fast and would've liked to know how Patrick figured Amy out... Otherwise great read!

To Anonymous: Her name is clearly Amy. He says "Happy Valentine's Eve" as in the night before... Similar to New Year's Eve.

Romantic, and with characters you get to care about. I enjoyed this, a lot.

I did feel he made one heck of a leap from realising she cared for him to assuming she'd welcome him remodelling her bedroom as a love nest, but heck, it's meant to be a fantasy! (Though I still wonder how he got into her house.)