All Comments on 'A Late Shift Ch. 02'

by Lion24655

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kathy2b46kathy2b46over 11 years ago
Great

iloved it, so hot, what an experience to have in real life, was this a true story, wow

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
son got more than screwed by his mom

It might be his mom but he did more than worked his ass off and his mother acted and is a bitch to treat her son like she did. After all it was Mark that actually worked his ass off and she got his hard earned wages and she did not even offered to give him his share of the wages. It was Mark that got her, her dream home. Mark should get 100 men and maybe some women and gangbang his mom from a friday night to sunday with out stopping. But other wise the story was great turn on.

kaidmankaidmanover 11 years ago
good but....

I liked it but I was annoyed by the mothers flippant attitude I hope mark takes her roughly as much as he wants because she totally screwed him and then she has the nerve to feel like admonishing him for fucking her I feel if she tries he might just snap and force her to be his slut

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Interesting.

Great story so far. Hope you write the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
lovely story

Wow I loved this story. I wish I was in Sue's place. I'd love to be gangbaned all weekend

CharliegutzacheCharliegutzachealmost 8 years ago
Great story

That was a fairly great story, really hot, wild sex, but it is a great shame the way poor Mark was treated, that said is there going to a 3rd chapter. Rated HOT & WILD A+

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Totally different.!

First time i ever read a gangbang story thus,.seemed a bit odd

A bif wired for me but ,Well good story in all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Part three....

... In which Kelly joins the fun would be great!

HardsoftailHardsoftailalmost 2 years ago

Great story, felt like Lion24655 left us hanging and wanting more. Did Lion finish the series under a different title.

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