All Comments on 'A Lesbian Love Story'

and it fits your title well... Good descriptions, too.

I really enjoyed your story line. It's much more erotic than the usual horny coed roommates at university kind of lesbian tale, and because of the mental and moral strains on your characters it has a bigger erotic punch when they finally do give in.

However, I find the writing to be a bit stiff and lacking in descriptiveness in a few places. Not enough to ruin a story, but a little polish could have delivered an even hotter tale.

Thank you for a delightfully romantic lesbian love story.

A good story well told with I feel a lot of self history blended in

Very sweet :) Xx

Lovely story, hope all goes well in the future.