All Comments on 'A Lesson on Greene'

by YoursSINSerely

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A bit further and more northeastern of the river.

Well, that was certainly different. I was green with envy.

Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
5 green stamps for your entertaining story.

Loved the offbeat humor in it. Thanks for a good time.

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 15 years ago
Good

Good story. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

AlexysQuinnAlexysQuinnabout 15 years ago
Cute . . .

concept for green. Good luck in the contest.

DG HearDG Hearabout 15 years ago
cute story

I would like to hear more about them. It doesn't have to be an Earth Day submission to continue the story. She's a devious little creature and I would like to hear more about her.

DG

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101about 15 years ago
cute

This was a cute story, but not really all that erotic.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101about 15 years ago
cute

This was a cute story, but not really all that erotic.

TE999TE999about 15 years ago
A clever take...

on the Earth Day theme. Many's the time I've bullshitted my way through an essay assignment. Good one, SINS.

Austin8Austin8about 15 years ago
"Ahhh, the ol' color wheel."

Cool, good luck in the contest. A8

DevilOrAngelDevilOrAngelabout 15 years ago
Good story not quite erotic for me

Good luck on the contest Sin

shoeslayershoeslayerover 14 years ago
Wonderfull

Dear Yours SinSerely,

"I am very impressed!" I am reading this an somehow in the back o' my head i am thinking, "Geeeze not writing about being intimate with someone? an then along comes

Bill (literally!) and the bedroom is now a place of passion

an' not just a place to work the ol' puter or maybe a puter of a different kind.

"You are Great!"

Shoeslayer

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A charming story

Hi there, I really liked the story,

all your stories ! and from an old

biker, 2 thumbs up. Keep writing!

Anonymous
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