by SPEN STERLING
That was out of this world. I wished it had went on. You have to do more with these two. Loved it keep up the great work.
It has been a long time since I have enjoyed a story as much as I have this one.
Jim has won her heart and he will now show her how it feels to have a man worship her. She can let her love blossom, and be assured that the love she gives will be returned ten fold. She has found the love of an older man that will nurture her and she will grow with experence and will be the best lover Jim will ever find. Thanks for the warm and loving story.......Rich
I love how it slowly built to the end. Great story, I hope your write many more like it.
Strong characters, rounded dialogue, gentle plotting, sensual description -- exactly what erotica should be all about.
My previous comment referring to a 5 year absence was sent in error and intended for another author. I trust that we do not have to wait 5 years for another great story from THIS author.
Why not? This could lead into a very beautiful & touching story. You've already started.
The is the second of your stories I've read. It won't be the last. Thank you for the work you put into this one, as well.
Thank you for a wonderful story, I would love to read what happens to them from here. There is scope for a relationship to build.
You are so talented in writing these kind of stories. The slow building of sexual tension is just wonderful. Like other's comments, I love to read your stories. Please keep writing. Definitely a 5.
You're a good writer. Great idea. Just thought you tried to force too much into a short story. The sexual tension could've lingered for a bit longer in my opinion. Good stuff nevertheless