All Comments on 'A Life Changing Experience'

by SPEN STERLING

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MJMsPussycatMJMsPussycatalmost 15 years ago
Great

That was out of this world. I wished it had went on. You have to do more with these two. Loved it keep up the great work.

HoosierFriendHoosierFriendalmost 15 years ago
Delightful

It has been a long time since I have enjoyed a story as much as I have this one.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
Maggie will be treated as a goddess or angel

Jim has won her heart and he will now show her how it feels to have a man worship her. She can let her love blossom, and be assured that the love she gives will be returned ten fold. She has found the love of an older man that will nurture her and she will grow with experence and will be the best lover Jim will ever find. Thanks for the warm and loving story.......Rich

MissSensesMissSensesalmost 15 years ago
Awesome story!

I love how it slowly built to the end. Great story, I hope your write many more like it.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 15 years ago
Textbook definition

Strong characters, rounded dialogue, gentle plotting, sensual description -- exactly what erotica should be all about.

William smythWilliam smythalmost 15 years ago
Correction

My previous comment referring to a 5 year absence was sent in error and intended for another author. I trust that we do not have to wait 5 years for another great story from THIS author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Story

This was a touching sexually romantic story. Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You should continue this one

Why not? This could lead into a very beautiful & touching story. You've already started.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
From a Geezer

Great Story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Loved it! 5*****

Thank you. tom anon

JustaGuyInTXJustaGuyInTXover 8 years ago
Another One

The is the second of your stories I've read. It won't be the last. Thank you for the work you put into this one, as well.

ukguy55ukguy55over 8 years ago
Excellent.

Lovely story so well written from start to finish.

Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 8 years ago
fantastic

Thank you for a wonderful story, I would love to read what happens to them from here. There is scope for a relationship to build.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very, very, nicely done.

You are so talented in writing these kind of stories. The slow building of sexual tension is just wonderful. Like other's comments, I love to read your stories. Please keep writing. Definitely a 5.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

You're a good writer. Great idea. Just thought you tried to force too much into a short story. The sexual tension could've lingered for a bit longer in my opinion. Good stuff nevertheless

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I love to visualize a good erotic story. My favorite stories involve people being compelled by passion to do something unexpected. I enjoy feedback, so let me know what you think of my stories.