All Comments on 'A Little Cabin in the Woods Ch. 02'

by VikingRyan

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
"Neither one seemed the least bit unashamed, ..."

Don't you mean 'ashamed' rather than 'unashamed'?

"Suddenly their was movement in the tub as Kat slid across ..." - 'there'?

hotladyvanessahotladyvanessaover 12 years ago
Good story!

The story was good. I always find it amusing when someone takes the time to comment "anonymously" on a few typos....especially with a story this good. Who cares? Seriously! If you really care that much, "anon", then at least have the courage to give your name....and let us check out your fabulous work! LOL I enjoyed the story and have the intelligence to comprehend it despite a few typos. Thanks, Viking!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The dreaded hot tub strikes again.

Imaginative not. 2 stars.

Mrs_ReardonMrs_Reardonover 12 years ago
Yummy story...

I look forward to the next chapter! :)

zowieguszowiegusover 12 years ago

like this story and part 1 also...

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous