All Comments on 'A Little Harmless Blackmail'

by aznaked

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Nice

I enjoyed your style of writing and the story overall. It was a much appreciated change of pace from most of what I've read here and thought it to be nice.

Even without sex the story was captivating and held my intrest. I implore you to write more so I may further enjoy your creative works. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
this bit pretty unrealistic

"Since I had a pretty good tan from going nude in the yard most of the summer, I decided to be naked and blend into the darkness even more."

lol, what?

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