All Comments on 'A Long Time Coming'

This was good. There were a few "glitches" -- some dialogue was overly formal, and at one point he put two "digests" inside her -- but over all the story was well-written.

I agree with the previous comment. You left the ending open for a part two which should be a s enjoyable.

Looking forward to you continueing this story - you could take this far with the ending and some of the comments in the story. I would suggest that you use a proofreader tho - as was pointed out earlier, a few glitches... I do have to tell you tho that you hit my all time pet peeve when he had his hands around her waste.... I have stopped reading many stories when I hit that one! I am glad I finished yours -- look forward to more!