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His heart twisted in his chest and he suddenly understood why she had been so afraid to tell him the truth. Once she had thought he was dead and it had almost broken her completely. That pain had never fully left her and was what drove her relentlessly to ensure he was always safe along with the pack. She would never do anything to endanger him or his people.
"You couldn't ever lose me," he groaned softly rocking her gently as he kissed the top of her head. "You'll always be my Annie, my baby girl. Nothing and no one will ever be able to take that away. I swear it."
His gaze connected with Gard's, his eyes hardening as he gave his sister all the reassurance she needed. For a moment they glared at each other and then the vampire slowly nodded his head, conceding they both had a valid claim to call this woman their sister.
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymous9 months agoIt's a miracle any of these characters are still alive given how high-strung and prone to violence they are. Maybe some classes in meditation or yoga would help? (Yes, I know the story is more entertaining as it is)
Anonymousover 7 years agoIf they told everything to each other and talked everything out there would b no story it would b just dialog. It would b boring and no one would read it. Surely you youself would prefer an interesting story opposed to a story that nothing ever exciting ever happens?
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThe complete lack of communication in ALL of these stories is seriously starting to get on my nerves.
Are you sriously going to tell me that creatures that can live for hundreds or even thousands of years have not figured out the importance of communication?
All this bullshit about the other person not understanding when they haven't made the slightest attempt to explain.
I might not be able to finish this shit.
TantricMantraover 11 years agoSorry Jaz! I'm on my iPad. I didn't mean to press 4stars, I was going for 5... But it doesn't seem like I can correct that now.
My apologies x
Anonymousover 11 years agoIs why, Count2Three, you continue to read Jaz's stories, when it's so obvious you don't like them. Honestly, if all you're going to do is complain (in damn near every story, too), then why don't you stop reading? That way the rest of us can enjoy without your stupid little comments.
On further note. Her character, Dayton, losing his mate, would be like a man losing his wife, or a wife losing her husband. Trust me, the pain is crippling.
As for long hair on a man? It's hot... Of course, you're probably bald. I wonder if that's why you have such an issue with the men's sexy long locks.
LynnMckalmost 12 years agoIf you don't like Jaz's style, her story, her imagination, creativity, bra size, number of pets . . .just leave those of us who are so enamored with her in peace. What is with this compulsive need you have to find fault. Cripes if it is that important write a better story yourself. There is absolutely NOTHING wrong with what Jaz is doing. She is not writing this story to be the story you would write (if you could write) she is writing the story she wants to write. I for one like it greatly just the way it is.
Even if I did not I would not be enough of an ass to find fault with her publicly. Have you no couths at all. She is sharing copius amounts of her time, energy, creativity, and love with you at no cost whatsoever. Where else can you get that? Back off and shut up! Lynn
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoBut honestly, I like the comments even more. I'm rolling on the floor laughing at some of the stuff people point out - if this ever gets published as a book, you need to add an Ancient called the "Commentator" who just hangs back and points out all the same things your fans have.
TDRobinsonalmost 12 years agoforget what the rest say i liked the story and the abilities the stories a bit long but worth it again I LIKE
LynneLynne23almost 12 years agoBut I personally have no complaints. =P I love your style in writing and I love how it's so easy to get wrapped up in the emotions that the characters feel. That's one of the things I find most attractive when I'm reading a story: you feel what the characters feel, you can almost smell what they smell, and it sure as hell sucks when the series ends! Keep up the amazing work. You're very, very talented at capturing readers. =)
count2threealmost 12 years agoNo more running away. Everyone on this story constantly runs away. Its just ridiculous.
Your Mate is dead and someone kisses you ? Run away !
Your Sister is a Vampire Queen ? Run away !
Your coffee cold ? Run away !
No more Bagels ? Run away !
Where does it stop. All those guys are supposedly tough as nails. News-flash: Tough men don't run away ! (Also they don't have long hair, but thats another topic)
