by PushTheButton
So build up for 3 quarters of a page and then a paragraph sex scene? Well THAT was anti-climactic... literally
I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it. I wrote this eight years ago so maybe it would be more detailed these days. However, for me a large part of the enjoyment in sex IS in the build up, hence the detail. And ultimately, I write for myself and if anyone else appreciates it, then that's a bonus.
PTB, there are certainly more in this bank of "written long ago" stories, I would think. Thank you just the same, Artie