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All Comments on 'A Loser and a Winner'

by brewdude2003

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stevaroonistevarooniover 17 years ago
Worth it, if only for the closing line

Good descriptives, some pretty interesting subtext going on. It felt a bit rushed, but that's not so bad. Fun.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Cool... I wish I had had a brother

I loved the last few chapters even though he prematurely ejaculated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
One Annoying Thing

Dude! I Have Yet To Meet A Sports Bra With A Clasp... They Come Off Like Tank Tops. Please Learn About Stuff Before You Write. Aside From That... Pretty Good Man!. Look Forward To Another

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