All Comments on 'A Love Defined'

by MandiraCarpenter

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
A refreshing start

Hope this is just the first chapter of a romance series. Love their beginnning and hope more will be on the way soon .......

Amelia

theognistheognisalmost 13 years ago
*****

Very nice.

Five.

NightimevisionsNightimevisionsalmost 13 years ago
Great Start

This was an awesome start to what I hope is much more story. Keep up the great work.

honeybreehoneybreealmost 13 years ago
A very nice start for these two...

I can't wait to see what happens next!

mekakymekakyalmost 13 years ago
Great start!

Can't wait to read more!

creepyrjcreepyrjalmost 13 years ago

Great start keep it up!

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 13 years ago
wow

loved this story so sweet and tender, please let it stay that way with the update, this is just wow.

bluewillybluebluewillybluealmost 13 years ago
great job, sweet story

looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Incredible

G'day from an Aussie, on mobile phone, brilliant story

can't wait for more.

eodomeodomalmost 13 years ago
Not your first

I noticed this is your first submission to this site. I'm sure it's not your first story. Very well defined and a good read. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. I'm sure there will be many more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Five stars! Looking forward to see how this romance develops.

london101london101over 11 years ago
omg

VERY cute start!

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 11 years ago
So very sweet.

I can not wait to read more. So I am thinking about 20 or so chapters should do it for me.

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 11 years ago
So very sweet.

I can not wait to read more. So I am thinking about 20 or so chapters should do it for me.

KittyOh48KittyOh48almost 9 years ago
Sweet

Landon and Kyla cute non-couple, but I know things are about to change. Glad she has found a nice guy, so her first time will be enjoyable.

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