All Comments on 'A Love Story'

The ending was a surprise of sorts. Very good.

The story was great, and the ending was a treat. It was something different. Keep on writting.

Great story, but I have to admit that the ending threw me for a loop. You worked it in very well.

Lovely as always, Jena. Perfectly titled, because it is exactly that, a love story. Both characters ring true, with a melancholy touch that is shedded as the inevitable occurs and both face up to their needs, their desires and their love. Well Done

Love the story. Gena still leaves me hanging until the end, trying to guess what type of relationship the characters are involved in and I love it.

Greg

All through it, I had them pegged as siblings. That just shows how little I know about your stories. Except to emphatically state that they are all good! Thanks for your work.

that was a very clever story. I liked the way you raised the question of their relationship and how the question was answered. neat that they remained together afterwards. what son would not have done the same thing to stay with his own beautiful mother so they could continue the wild, passionate love-making with complete abandon. Well done!!!!