All Comments on 'A Loving Breakfast'

One of the things I love about good erotica is its ability to convey feelings as well as physical stimulus, and this story really hits the mark!

That was a nice story and for me, a very pleasant trip down memory lane.

I wish I had written it myself. It reminds me of my own best friend. We've never taken that extra step, but I know it's something we've thought about exploring.

I loved reading this story. I like the way it was written. It followed very smooth. I didn't have to go back and re-read to follow it. The Author wrote a very nice Romantic Story. That could happen in real life. Thanks, JF for a story that was not trash. Minnie

Congratulations Foolie! You did a wonderful job framing their relationship. It was very sweet and sentimental. I appreciated your care in detailing the feelings these two share for each other! Great job!

Well, Fool...........I knew you could do it. I thoroughly enjoyed your story and I'm so glad you did it. It makes me totally envious of the two friends. I can't wait for another submission.......Luv ya darlin...xoxoxo...Lil Slice Of Cherry Pie

Wow! that was exquisite! I have (sadly) been reading some definitely sub-standard material, lately. This makes up for it - in spades!! So well crafted. Such a pleasure to read - I'm going back to read it more slowly, carefully - and I expect to enjoy it even more, second time around.

Thank you, so much.

*hugs JF* I thoroughly enjoyed your submission...the storyline and the characters were real and well-thought out. Please entertain with more. xoxo rangergirl

emotions as well as you do breakfast. Thanks for sharing this one.

Carrie.

Loved it...wished I had read it earlier! Such a romantic..I never would have guessed *smooches* Asiansilk

Just beautiful JF. I SO needed this. Thank you. Very very sweet and very realistically nice guy forbidden passion. Take care -- FMG

great story JF, how much better can it be than to realize you're in love with your best friend.

mamma

Wow...Just wow...

The emotions, the wanting, the longing...I think I can speak for 99% of the girls out there when I say that I SO wish I had a guy like that in my life - a best friend-turned-lover...

How delightfully sweet...*sigh*

I loved the slow build up and satisfying climax. The bold and yet also at times somewhat timid nature of the entire situation. It is just so sweet! Fun dialogue to read!

Best friends falling in love or rather discovering that they both do love each other is wonderful! Loved it~

I really loved this story! Your characters were very believable and sweet. Lovely!

Very Nice. I would have liked to have been a fly on the wall when they had their “talk” after the shower. A very nice story, indeed.