All Comments on 'A Loving Son'

A truly captivating story. You got the sexy intimacy, the level of emotions, and it passed the reality check. I surely hope to see chapter 2 describing what happens next between Cathy and her husbands interaction with the three/four of them. Great read.

This could have been better. You need to go through this again, fix your grammatical errors, and have someone beta.

Beautifully done.

Loved the story.

Thanks for the read

There were a number of mistakes (typos and words I assume were misspelled, or at least misused) which left me scratching my head as to what the hell you'd attempted to write. Sentences that made no sense, words that made no sense, and so on. Was this rushed, or what? If so, you'd have been better off posting it later, after it had been better edited.

Loved your story...the little things did NOT deter from it at all for me...keep on writing 'em!

Such a hot story that clearly took alot of time to write. Loved the sensual and loving scenes with his mother... maybe her belly will start to swell ;)

This could have been so much better if it had been written with some degree of coherence. It took me longer than normal to read because of the mistakes. Those mistakes interrupted the flow of this story. Some will be upset because reader's, like me, are "picking" on your writting. However, we are not "picking" on the writting, just trying to encourage you to get additional help to improve your writting. The story idea was very interesting, and would have been more enjoyable if the writting had been cleaner. Requesting help is a sign of strength, and shows your desire to improve. Reader's are not looking for the next "great novel" on this site, just a well written story for their enjoyment.

Wished you had fleshed the story out a page or two more and gone into the threesomes they had later on.

It really was great. You should keep writing.

Very good I hope that you will chose to write more stories

Quality.........not just a name......that story was pure quality magic and WOW!!!!!

MORE MORE MORE 👍👍👏👏

Intense, intoxicating, fantastic. Well written story, please keep the work up, very good!

Very good quality..

Couldn't get past the first page. First, ANAL, then telling him not to fall in love? Ya, that's great at first but she's just using him. Gee, a guy having feelings of love. That's a first ;)

Good fist story. Very enjoyable.