All Comments on 'A Maiden's Dream on the Eve of St. Agnes' Day'

Beautifully written, wonderful story!

In the beginning I started to get a feel for who the character was, and the portrayal of college life and the surreal disparity between the last year of high school and first year of college was right on. It brought back memories of my first year away at college. But the dialogue didn't ring true (I've never talked about a "cherry" in my whole life, nor have I ever heard my friends do so), and I didn't really get the point of the dream sequence - I didn't find it very erotic. On the other hand the story was quite descriptive (I could imagine her stepping in ankle high snow drifts) so from a wordsmith perspective, it was written well.