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"Hello?"
"YOU HAVE A DATE FOR THE GSK CONCERT!" Sue shouted into the phone.
Maddie suddenly forgot her aunt. "GSK! They've been sold out for months! Who do we have to murder to get there?"
"No! Seriously, I met two guys, and Maddie they are SO SO GOOD LOOKING! And we have a double date with them and they have second row seats and BACK STAGE PASSES! Maddie! I think these might be THE GUYS! I MEAN THEEEE GUYS!"
"Hold on, roomy!" Maddie said. "First, don't do anything until I get a chance to check them out with you! Now start by telling me..."
"Everyone was in the lobby last night and I started talking to this really good looking guy named Fredrick, oh! He's so hot! And he's from England! And his brother came up and joined us and I told them about you, so, get this..." Sue paused. "You are going to the concert with a beee-u-tee-ful guy named Johann! Maddie! I'm not kidding! I think these guys could be our Prince Charmings! Maddie? Maddie? Maddie? Hello?"
- COMMENTS
nerdygrrlover 13 years agoIn the beginning I started to get a feel for who the character was, and the portrayal of college life and the surreal disparity between the last year of high school and first year of college was right on. It brought back memories of my first year away at college. But the dialogue didn't ring true (I've never talked about a "cherry" in my whole life, nor have I ever heard my friends do so), and I didn't really get the point of the dream sequence - I didn't find it very erotic. On the other hand the story was quite descriptive (I could imagine her stepping in ankle high snow drifts) so from a wordsmith perspective, it was written well.
