All Comments on 'A Marine Called Jason'

This was just a great story. I couldn't wait to what happened next. I think the adventures of " A Marine called Jason" should continue.

You're story is absolutely well written. I fell in love with both characters, and their love story. Fantastic! I would love to see the continuation with Jason returning, getting married and continuing his frienship/relationship with his friend, with his wife's blessing.

I absolutely loved this well written and personal story. I haven't a clue if written from experience but i will say that you have written it so well that it reads that way.

I applaude your writing style and hope you will continue with these characters. They were believable. You made them real. And I for one would like to know where they go in your mind.

Thanks for a good story! Jane

Except for the occasional typo, this is one of the best pieces I've read in a long time. Character development, the setting, the raw gut emotion of same sex involvement in a war zone. I bow to your expertise. You've raised the bar for erotic liturature IMHO. SEALS rule btw. ^_^

Except for the occasional typo, this is one of the best pieces I've read in a long time. Character development, the setting, the raw gut emotion of same sex involvement in a war zone. I bow to your expertise. You've raised the bar for erotic liturature IMHO. SEALS rule btw. ^_^

A sweet, hot, powerful love story.

Absolute brilliance! I'd be lying if I said I didn't want to read more between the two of them. Great work!

That was just fantastic! I loved every word of it. I would love to see another story about them. it wa a beatiful love story

Fantastic story. Well-developed and immersive.

Absolutely fantastic. An emotive story with a sexual side that makes it an even more better read. Going to read the other 2 parts of it now! Hope they're just as good!

i hope that people like these two characters exist. full of flaws, but forgiving enough to greet each other with perfect respect, and so miraculously able and suited to each other that thy can orchestrate their feelings into a harmony of perfect sex.

you must be an incredibly talented lover yourself, man. lucky the man who finds you in the body you have or want to have in the mood to get a story going. ;-) take care!

Love that hard-man, muscle-bound, big-dick fucking shit!

Nice one!

Well written, hot and loaded with emotion. I cried at the end. Thank you!

This is a great story, but it's a great NOVEL.

I'm exhausted. Short stories need to be SHORT.

impressive. lots of sex but w/ lots of character development and kind of a poignant story. great job.

This part of your trilogy was fantastic. I love your characters and your style of drawing me into their lives. Thank you.

If there was one thing that I would say in criticism....

Sailors, Marines, and Soldiers are VERY different and you substitute the phrases a few times. It didn't discourage my reading though.

I usually dislike to read beyond 2 pages.. but you got me up till pg 5

OK, lots of sex. But any male over 16 or 17 is up for that. Jack off to your own video cam, OK? Navy Seals, snipers, other men in combat need relief in R & R, but this approach to the subject is unnecessarily mean and nasty, and I don't like deception & life on the sly.

This is a terrific tale of macho men -- HOT and JUICY SEX! And lots of it -- you'd think they were rampant 18-year-olds! The character development from fucking each other blind without ever a kiss, through strong sense of true brothers giving to each other, to the quiet generosity that is the hallmark of love, all is beautifully described.

I loved this story! Your writing has depth while still having the hot erotic contents.

I read this years ago on another website. I never forgot it. Beautifully written it conveys emotions, lusts, desires, hate & jealously. Serious alpha male stench is present, too. LOL

Yet it's tender and compassionate too.

HOT! HOT! HOT!

I've read the whole series and it's fuckin' awesome! Great plot, great sex. Personally I don't really like the idea of being the bitch of an alpha male. I felt sorry for Brad because Jason didn't love him the way he did.......I could relate. That goes to show how realistic your story is. It's one of the best I've read here, and I'd like to see more. Keep it up!

I really enjoyed all of the chapters to your story, I was sad at how you ended it. I Really wanted them tto meet up in the states and stay together. Adopt a kid or two, you know fairy tale. But loved the sex and how close they were! Thanks for the story. I really love military stories!

Great story so far

I really hope this gets updated!

Did he cum back

I was in the marines for five years.2years in Japan.One night there were 3 of us in the. Bar.And we were trying to pick up these 3 jap girls.So we were drinking pretty hard liquor and these bitches try taking our money.So we smacked the bitch and a big fight broke out.and they called the M.P.s. So we had to get out of there real fast.There was a little hotel down the street.So we got a room and stay the night.These two black guys I was with.Kept yelling that they wanted some ass.I told them to be quite or the MPS are going to find us.They kept making noise.And I was real horny myself .THEN I SAID YOU GUYS ARE THAT HORNY.THEY SAID FUCK YA. I SAID SO AM I.THEN I WAS SITTING THERE AND SAID FUCK.I WOULD SUCK A COCK RIGHT NOW IF I COULD. THEN THEY TURNED AROUND AND SAID ARE YOU SERIOUS.I SAID FUCK YA.THEY LOOKED AT ME AND SAID YOU WOULD SUCK OUR BLACK COCKS.I SAID WHY NOT.we aren't going to get any thing tonight.And I really want something.I said If you guys want Ill have sex with you.They said ok.I told them to get naked.I told them that I want to suck and fuck.So they got naked and so did I.I laid on the bed and said to one .stick your cock in my mouth and the other one stick his cock in my ass.these guys fucked me for 4 hours straight.And I sucked them off all night.Every time one of them would get done with my ass.I would suck their cocks clean.So we started doing this the whole time we were in Japan.And they loved having a white guy doing this to them.And so did I. Now all I suck is black guys.There cocks are the best.P.S. From a faggot MARINE.And there is alot of them.2EE

This is the best story ever as far as I can remember 5 stars are not enough. I want it to continue but please please don't kill him off.

I guess these are based on the Greg & joey sex tapes. awesome sex, but can't really tolerate em. could still be as good without the domination alpha stuff if the writer wanted it to.

Love the sex, love their descriptions, love Jason's chest hair, and love the growing love between them.