All Comments on 'A Marriage of Convenience'

five stars...loved this.

I am digging this. Hope you post the next chapter soon.

I like his laconic attitude, he is playing with her like she is a cat's toy.

I am glad he is gorgeous, I look forward to seeing her sexuality blossom.

Thank you for paying attention to spelling and grammar.

I hope Sara marries her captor. I hope she carries his child in her belly and has more children by him. I think deep down this is what she wants - a lifetime of living with her captor an raising his children with him. I wish them a life time of happiness together.

MOREEEEEE

You really need to keep this going!

Where you wording and descriptiveness is excellent at times it is over done and runs on.

I stopped reading a little more then a quarter down the page. Using words to describe every slight detail for ever heartbeat, when every breath is a struggle to continue...blah blah blah...okay, good, but, you really over do it.

Keep writing, but no need to use such huge words. Be a bit more concise. You can do it! You can tell the story and bring them with you through your fantasy without boring them and putting them to sleep.

injudiciously and others, you don't want your reader to have to sit there with a dictionary through out your story

I loved it!

Hope there is another chapter soon.

And, as another reader said, thanks for the superb editing. I am really enjoying the dynamic between Sara and her captor.

Please tell me this isn't the end

keep it coming.

please more.

I heard this phrase every so often at work. I know where you got it from 😘😇. Don’t worry, I won’t tell.

Great start...looking forward to what's next.