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I believe the groan lasted about five seconds. I felt the shiver as your leg rested against mine. You did what I asked. I felt you against me. The contact was... I had to stop typing. My eyes closed as I remembered it. I’m not one but it was one of the sexiest moments of my life. Not one what you ask? Not an exhibitionist. I was on my back allowing my lover to be seen by anyone out jogging, walking their dog, or just out. Maybe one day we’d do this in daylight. Maybe.
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Author’s Notes:
This is the fourth of what will be six chapters. It’s long but, as mentioned before, the story seems to dictate when I end a chapter. And my readers seem to enjoy a long chapter.
If you’re just finding me, thank you. If not, I’m trying some new things in this story. I hope they’re not distracting.
Something else – I try to change up how the characters talk and stay away from getting predictable in dialogue and other things. I try to write like we humans talk – it’s not always in a straight line, whether it’s speech or thought.
I also mentioned that a story of 150,000 or so words is likely to have a few misspelled. I write, I edit, and I have someone very capable proof. And still things get missed. Please make allowances for the human factor.
I adore interaction with those who choose to read my stories. If you are interested in a little more ‘Vixen,’ please check my bio. And won’t you please vote... and please consider leaving a comment. I honestly don’t mind constructive criticism. It can and does help. And if you feel the need to do so privately you can email me. I promise to respond. It makes writing so much more fun. Thanks to all!! ~ AVL ~
- COMMENTS
Mymantoy999over 7 years agoa few paragraphs in this chapter. Lissy was suddenly the Dominant and Kara was the submissive??? I even went back and reread that entire section about 6 times! As an old Leatherman, we did not have (and many actually frowned upon) anyone that called themselves a "switch". It was just unheard of years ago.
But then my old brain caught up with the story and I remembered Kara had expressed an interest in exhibitionism. So all was clear again, and it was HOT!!!
Also was good to let Kara show her insecurities, as we all have them and many of us try very hard to conceal them.
Well, I am slowly getting caught up with the story. Thanks again for a well written journey of 2 lovers!
Slave Ed
DCohen2349over 10 years agoOthers far more eloquent than me have said many of the same things I felt reading this.
I'll just say, "Well done!"
Qui3t0n3over 10 years agothis strangley hot shit yo 4 real n slightly fuckd yo but should keep doin ya thing 4real
Anonymousover 10 years agoSo nice to see Lissie finally healing, becoming her strong, confident self. Please dont overdo it though, so easy to fall into the the D/s power-trip with nastiness. Those are fine kids she raised, she can hold her balance, and Kara deserve better.
Now dont feel pressured to rush the writing of Chapter 5. I can wait, at least until noon tomorrow ;-))
love VvV
janny54over 10 years agothat is what this chapter brings to light and life! AVL you have taken us to a new level of intimacy and loving, upping the ante with lissy and kara. being a part of watching their relationship crumble and rebuild beyond the foundation they had a
already established to new heights has created sensory overload in a most marvelous way. every emotion, tears, laughter, sadness and heartache and what appears to be a sort of rebirth in their relationship that goes with lovers loving lovingly.
again you have taken us on a journey many of us long for in our own lives.
thank you for sharing your wonderful, creative, witty and emotional writing that touches new levels...
jan
DocSavage656over 10 years agoOk, I think I 459'd that one from you Vixen, but it's true. Lovers loving lovingly was what that chapter was all about to me. You've written a beautiful chapter to ease our doubts of Kara's love for Lissy and their future together.
The sexual experimentation the characters are doing is... is... DAMN HOT! WOW! I cant wait to see what you dream up for these two girls next.
Keep up the wonderful work and Thank You for your great writing.
Doc
idrubloodover 10 years agoThank you so much AVL!
This story covers it all: love, sadness, laughter, heartbreak, making up, extremely passion filled sex and just breathtaking scenes of life's realities.
You have drawn me in with Lissy and Kara's passion, gotten me lost in their love, given me heartache with their hurts and then just wowed me with pulling them through it all.
I had tears when Rachel cried into Lissy chest, "I love her Mommy." It was so painfully beautiful.
Your writing just so wonderful, and I thank you so much for sharing it with us.
IDB.
MzFlyover 10 years agoThe way you breath life into your stories and characters is a thing of beauty. The intimacy, sexiness, laughter & tears are woven together in such unique and inspiring ways. I truly feel the emotions as I read these pages. I agree with the previous comment that this chapter was more than just hot, sweaty, tingly, awesome sex ;) It was more about the depth of emotion and rebuilding the trust between these two.
Lissy and Kara are just amazing together! I love that they are moving forward to cohabitation. Happily surprised with the Destiny & Shade cameo. Nice touch! A sigh of relief that Rachel & June are still going strong. Another excellent chapter Vixen! Thank you as always for sharing your talents with us.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI'm just now learning your style but I can't help but think you have a "Kara". Your words are purposeful, teeming with adulation and they make haste to my heart. I'm in awe of the raw emotion you're able to express between Lissy and her Kara. I was relieved to see these two able to work it through after a tremulous chapter three.
I checked your website and discussion area. Your community seems extraordinary. I'm not ready to jump into the pool yet but maybe some day soon.
- experienced
rkolnerover 10 years agoThe intensity of these two lovers is breathtaking. They go way beyond the physical and reach deep intimacy through their willingness to trust, express and give to one another. Vixen you take me to fantastical places through your stories that capture my heart and dare to me dream it for myself.
