All Comments on 'A Memorable Lesson'

Very interesting setting and premise. A well-told erotic fantasy of a master teaching his students what they

*really* need to know about growing up. I hope there will be more to follow!

This is one hell of a boring story.

Everything is so wrong.

The author has no clue regarding the subject. I suggest that the author, at the very least, go to high-school and get educated.

This tale has suspense, humour, and leaves the reader looking for just a little more. I'll look for more of your stories.

Good job, Tulip, very well done. I liked the brother coming to terms with the fact that his sister is a hot mama (lol), And you were worried about multiple point of view, but I have to say you pulled it off nicely. It flowed very very well. A couple things though, there seemed to be a bit of a language discrepancy...By the narration it seemed like we were in a more medieval-type setting, but the dialogue was too modern to support that feel...So I didn't quite know where I was on the timeline so to speak..lol ;) Um, I think that was all! Well done indeed.

Mmm....loved the way the tempo built, and the detail!!!

Loved all the detail! Oh yes please don't stop. I will definatly go back and read all your submissions. Great work!!

Congratulations on a good piece of writing, BT. The prose is almost lyrical in places and exudes the feel of a fable. In fact, it would probably have done well in Fantasy.

Rumple

This was a great story and I don't know what is wrong with Anon from Critic's Hell. It could use a lot of editing for typos, etc. but they don't distract from the story. I will be PMing you a list.

And a good lesson, at that. Very sensual. I did have the anachronism problem. I couldn't place the story it time or space. That did not detract from the sensuality. Good job!

Look forward to more from this author