All Comments on 'A Midsummer Night's Dream'

by VF_0079

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Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 12 years ago
Good start ...

... would like to see where this one goes.:)

mtnboymtnboyover 12 years ago
Good Start

You have made a good start on what can be a great story. Don't apologise for your writing skills because you are much better than many of the writers on this site. I only picked up on a couple of minor errors but none that detracted from the story. Keep on writing and be sure to have a sequel to this story.

VF_0079VF_0079over 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for your kind words as they embolden me to continue. The second chapter is already awaiting approval and I'm currently working on the third.

simaddictsimaddictover 12 years ago
Good job.

It was well written, and started as a good story. The only problem was it ended too soon. Keep on writing.

obiwan9962obiwan9962over 12 years ago
i don't normally read mff

but this has my attention. hurry up with the next leg :D... shoe, whatever

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