All Comments on 'A Model Bitch'

Good story but let down a bit by spelling & grammar, sorry it's not being picky & everyone makes mistakes but it detracts from the story & takes the readers focus away.

I loved the story, but the grammar, spelling, and sentence structure errors were distracting. I especially love the female perspective of a guy's Point of View on love and lust. Please do more stories, but have them edited.

Run-on sentences & plenty of mis-spelled words!!!