All Comments on 'A Move to Daddy's'

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dliterdliterover 13 years ago
no purpose, erotic or otherwise

This story served no purpose, either as erotic material or as jerk off material. It had no hidden moral and wasn't stimulating sexually on it's own. If he had found out that she was a virgin after he raped her that might have made it better.

C2J2C2J2about 11 years ago
eh...

Dont understand your story.... He calls his own daughter a whore at the end? WTF... I didnt even read the last page, just scrolling down.... Thats messed up

AnonymessAnonymessover 10 years ago
The end ruined it

Started off in a good direction but ended up being such an ugly story. What a shame as it was getting good until the end.

Corco763Corco763over 10 years ago
Schade ...

... Alles hat so gut angefangen. Ich habe mich auf eine zärtliche Liebesgeschichte eingestellt, aber der weitere Verlauf der Handlung hat mich gelinde gesagt sehr verwirrt.

Trotzdem habe ich 4 Sterne gegeben, weil die Story gut geschrieben und die Entwicklung interessant ist. Ich bin gespannt, wie es weiter geht.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Not very good...

...like some of your others. Gave it a 2.

x_pac6969x_pac6969over 6 years ago
Sorry cant get into this story

Cant get into stories about RAPE

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