All Comments on 'A Naive Bride'

daer u r lucky to have mother daughter every time to fuck

the scenes created through words are marvellous and good

XXXfilm may be created. Suncerely i advise u to contact

studio ECSTACY who are making indian b/f

Superb narration. Throughly enjoyed. Please continue this story of A naive bride.

one of the best reads so far in a desi backdrop. keep writing.. great with words.. very charming.. very enchanting.. very very good. two thumbs up!!

it was a long story....but only a perfectionist can write such a beautiful piece

a very very good story..plz keep continue writing new stories..m a fan of your stories..

This is the first time i am writing a comment.It was very very Good. The Best story i have ever read in an indian backdrop.Not sleasy and dirty but actually very romantic and proper in a way.Superb job.

the author is great. it is really unfortunate that we donot have anything new in last 2 years from siraj

I wish i could be her Brother-in-law.......I will suck her Anus too..........

From Anirban

email--analingus@rediffmail.com

halo sir

we are waiting

girls of KTTI polytechnic

Once again awesome story by an excellent writer.

I am a die hard fan of your stories. I have read all your stories many a times. Actually I am in relation (sexincest) with my own devar (brother in law). So we together read your stories during our hot lovemaking sessions. Actually we fantasize and role play characters of your stories, to add hotness in our relation.

As an Indian lover and reader, we together (me and my devar) believe that nothing more erotic than incest-taboo and forbidden love.

As an incest couple, we thought, if this story had detailed description of religious ceremony before or during love-making, it would add more spice. For example if you could include Pooja (Prayer of God), some chants, some religious rituals than it would be PERFECT scenario for this kind of story.

Once again your stories are fuel to our hot & forbidden relation.

Keep it up.

I am fan of Siraj Ahmed. Wonderful narrative. Lovely stories.

It was so very hot and steamy sex. U have created a perfect blend of eroticism and emotional charge. Don't stop now. Tell us what was there in the letter. Would finally love to see him getting both Preeti and Sheetal pregnant with him and fucking together.