All Comments on 'A Nerdy Girl'

Despite the lack of actual sex, it was very erotic and nicely done. I liked the description of the girl and how you didn't stop the story, but used the story and the action to describe her. The only advice I would give is to break up the long paragraphs some.

You wrote a nice start to this story but left is hanging. I hope you write a second chapter to this story describing what happens to them next. And whether a relationship between the two of them develops into a romance or not.