by Rob Conner
I've never seen this approach taken to the Brady Bunch,Good Job!!!!!
I really liked the twist on the Brady Bunch and now I can never watch the show without seeing this story in my head
It starts by leading you into a gentle direction of one idea and then launches you into a whirlwind of a a whole new life and world. Definitely keep up the good work.
It was really good, i'd like to see you incorporate more of the family, but yea it was a very interesting direction to take.
Next time have Gregg turn marsha into his sex slave with cindy and jan as Mistress Margos sex slaves.
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
Next time write one of jag mack as the Mistress Mack and Harm as her slave.
That was the funniest thing I ever read- never did like the Brady Bunch, and that was a great erotic twist on the show
...she is submitted to BLACK WORSHIP!!!...the imagination runs wild!!!!
Nice and kinky story, good plot, rich prose - continue the good work and come up with a follow-up.
Now do The Big Bang Theory. I have Bernadette and Stewart having a revenge sex affair after Bernadette catches Howard in bed with Rajesh. Amy Farrah Fowler, trying to be a 'bad girl' has brief affairs with Zach, and Penny's giant boyfriend, Penny's brother, Krempke, and the motorcycle riding Particle Physicist. Dr. Elizabeth Plimpton enjoys going through the stellar cast. Lucy, Alex, Dr. Plimpton, Sarah (not that anyone cares) , Mrs. Latham and others pick up the pieces of Leonard's heart after Penny gets drunk at a Halloween party and has a very public gangbang.
Not great at all; personally I would prefer seeing Mike and Carol have sex with Bobby and Cindy.