All Comments on 'A New Domination Ch. 02'

Please don't take a year to finish this story.

Thanks Don

This is, I have to admit, not my favourite niche and I wonder whether BDSM is the right category or not for this kind of story, Having said that, I have enjoyed both chapters enormously. You write well and I look forward to seeing where this will go next.

Thank you - and please try not to make us wait too long for Part Three!

as mentioned aboved please dont wait a year great story

Loved the second chapter. Though the husband's convient cheating just after the start of the D/s relationship starting seemed a little to pat. It was a nice twist making him as much a sub as Sally was though.

This is a well written story, was apprehensive to read given the taboo involved but was glad to have enjoyed.

beautiful tale of hope more result

Most of the reviews here involve some version of that sentence.

Didn't want any version of that idea make it sound like it wasn't true.

My form of domination would be so weak as be undetected, compared to the better stories in here.still hard to understand. Hard enough that I i know many people do not truly believe in it.

They are wrong.

I am glad they are.

And gives insight into how these things happen. As long as the parties are willingly into the relationship I see no harm. Live and let live. Thank you for writing.

The same comments as for chapter 1, except for the error list:

play book (playbook)

laughing stock (laughingstock)

mouth watering (mouth-watering)

ear splitting (earsplitting)

half-focussed (half-focused)

dampener (damper)

commonsense (common sense)

double quick (double-quick)

collapsed on to of me (top)

extra-curricular (extracurricular)

I am a sucker for this type of story. I guess because I was so close to and loved my mother so deeply.

Could feel the total submissive mind set was there my self.

This helps me magnify my submission

A great explanation of the dom/sub relationship that can exist, without harm to either partner.