All Comments on 'A New Encounter Ch. 03'

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DocOcDocOcalmost 13 years ago
Love, Love, Love

I know that it takes time to write the stories but I do so hate reading on the installment plan. Keep it up GOOD STORY!!!

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 13 years ago
Another great chapter.

I totally loved this story. This is a very good series. I hope to be able to read another chapter soon. I know you have a life though, so I'm not pushing.

NightimevisionsNightimevisionsalmost 13 years ago
Great story

Love this chapter and the story as a whole. I hope that you will be able to post another chapter soon. Keep up the great work.

mrpervy46mrpervy46almost 13 years ago
Wow

What an incredible story, it reminds me of the movie "Cat People 1942" and remake in 1982, as well as an episode of classic Star Trek "Assignment Earth" which aired Mar 29/68. Where a surprised secretary (young Teri Garr) saw a cat turn into a sexy lady and then back again before Kirk and Spock noticed. I love cats and always have and dreamed about this sort of thing most of my life. Thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Keep 'em coming!

Keep 'em coming!

allimbaallimbaalmost 13 years ago
such a great story!

I cannot wait to read more!

arelativearelativealmost 13 years ago
loving it

good read well written, dont remember seeing any grammar or spelling mistakes which i personally feel can ruin a great story. so all in all well worth the 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Don't

Wait a year, keep it moving, this is a great read. Thank you so much!

Dravin_BlackDravin_Blackabout 12 years ago
wonderfull so far

i hope thear is more to come

horsechick91horsechick91about 12 years ago
oh goodness

Oh please, Please, PLEASE continue. You have an excelent atoryline going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more!

and then what happens?!? what a cliffhanger ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please

Please continue this! The storyline is wonderful, and I love the characters! Not to mention, you simply can't end with a cliffhanger. It's not fair. PLEASE continue. And thank you in advance. <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MOAR

please?

jeredownjeredownover 11 years ago
LOVE

I loved it!!! can't waght for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more PLEASE

I love it I can't wait to see more

Stephen J

Riverwolf0222Riverwolf0222about 11 years ago
Love it

I love this story! I hope you will be continuing it.

LavonyaLavonyaabout 11 years ago
Can't WAIT for the next chapter!

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!

This is a little cheesy but the world would be boring without cheese in it!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
2 WORDS

TV SERIES - i beg you make it happen, this is pure gold.

asianToyasianToyabout 9 years ago
In a Hurry?

You write like each word costs a nickel. Think about the scene, alien and mate meet the president and you get it over with in a few paragraphs. The best of writers could maybe do that in a chapter. Slow down, enjoy and let us enjoy the event. It's like the sex. Don't think that the frequency of sex is as important as the emotional meaning to the participants. Your characters have no emotion except for the bipolar male. What's with him? You don't tell us so we don't know.

Also, don't jump the shark. No male penis has ever been in a woman womb and none ever will. Why do guys write that anyway?

asianToy

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 6 years ago
This is What I love About Sci Fi

"The President would like to see you in the Oval Office."

Ordinary guy, living his life one day. The next day, he has a sexy alien girlfriend and the President wants to see him in his office, lol.

skippersdadskippersdadover 2 years ago

Very good hope the President is not going to be a turd.

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