All Comments on 'A New Kind of Love Ch. 07'

I never knew lawyers would be allowed through the pearly gates of heaven. Appears they were put to good use. 'That's not allowed.' 'Your deal is invalid...' Quite clever scene having Archangel Gabriel and Michael rescue Mephistopheles from Lucifer's control. This chapter has more developed structure. It is more nuanced. Your story is refreshed.

It's like 5 am here XD good one. I can't say anything more because I'm in a hurry. But it's a very good story so far, believe me.