All Comments on 'A New Year a New Me'

it suck and i dont mean dicks

no bullsh here. the author should stop writing immediately. "sean" you really arent as good as your try hard style wants to be.

but you lost me when your name changed to Clive!

get your hand off it - fantasy - rubbish why waste your time

Try some commas and smaller paragraphs.

This being the third story of yours that i read, I somehow expected a bit more, but it is not as bad as some comments suggest. You are a prolific contributor & not every short story can be a musterpiece.

The ending was very realistic, something that has happened to most people who lived two concurrent lives and had to jump from one to the other at a moment's notice