All Comments on 'A New Year For Two'

by dawoolef

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good.

You should continue this story.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 13 years ago
Too short. Want, no, NEED more

Is Mum next?

If so, please write that chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hot and loving

Please let him impregnate his sister

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
next

what happens next does mom come home and find them together or do they move into a place of thier own does she get pregnant we need to know soon

DBRS

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Naw, Keep Mom out of it

Why does almost every incest story have to eventually include the entire family? There could be all kinds of playful fun between the two without Mom. Sneaking around and such.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 13 years ago
Really good

I hope that this is just a good start, because I would love to read more of this story.

Thanks

HamsterHamsterover 13 years ago
Good, well crafted short story.

I enjoyed the story but caught myself laughing because the description and matter-of-fact attitude of the sister in this story had me hearing Sarah Sidle's voice (you know, Sara Sidle, from CSI Las Vegas?). Notwithstanding the possibility of further episodes (escapades??), I really don't think Mom will become part of this. But that's up to dawoolf, isn't it?

Scorpio44Scorpio44over 13 years ago
Only 23 days to go!

I'll invite one of my sisters over and we can do our best to duplicate your adventure! It was a fun read.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
if he is going to cum 3 times within an hour or two

may as well have the entire family join in and dont forget every woman on the block.

Silliness. My goodness he is a 29 year old guy supposedly, he can have SOME self control.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Too twee

I read the first few paragraphs. It seemed too 'twee'. It didn't make me want to read on. Sorry !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
talk about rushed

no background as to their relationship before this a piss poor unrealistic rush to sex and no end because it was to SHORT. all in all a total waste of everyones time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The way you described the mother, guess she will be fucking him next!!

Pissant story

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