All Comments on 'A New Years Indecent Proposition'

...but a scattering of missing words made it an (only very) slightly annoying read in places. 4-1/2 stars

the lady doth protest too much. You (or your character) were having too much fun. As they say, bi now, gay later. But good hot sex, lots of anatomy and a playful attitude go a long way. Keep writing. Agree you need to proofread more carefully. "Beck and call", not "beckon call".

That sucked belch...