All Comments on 'A Nice Sister's Gift Ch. 01'

learn to write in english or just submit your stories in your own language and stop giving us headaches trying to figure out what you are saying

but wanted to give you a different idea than "learn": maybe you don't write in perfect English, but your writing is FAR better than many other writers use, even though English is their FIRST language. So keep submitting your stories; improve your skills as you can, but don't stop writing just because you don't do it perfectly, because you're better than many other writers.

What I nice sister lucky ass

Whats the point of a story if I can't understand what you're saying? Have a proofreader if English isn't your first language PLEASE!!!!!!

Sweet! Liked the ending. ;)

Fucking load of rubbish By a wanker