All Comments on 'A Nice Sister's Gift Ch. 02'

Good topic, good start, a little more smoldering sex stuff, and you'll be in.

this was a good story but like the asshole you are you never finished the dam story if you aren't going to finish then please don't start show some respect for the readers we don't like being left hanging

I had no problems reading your stories, i don't think anyone would be able to tell English isn't your native tongue. Keep up the good work.

It was awesome. Made me think!

this is fuckin hot story i would love to hear wat happened in shower

I agree keep these comeing they are also getting better I don't see the errors anyway I just read lol I am insane when it come to reviewing that is lol anyway keepum cumin

if not being a native speaker has done anything to your writing, it is to make it more descriptive. Then a regular English speaker, you use your whole knowledge of the language while some people use almost none.

Keep up the good work.

I think you should continue the story. Tell where it goes from there

You did very well with your English. And what a story!!! GREAT!!! Keep them coming.

If you find someone on here to proofread your story it makes the story even better.

Great read. Please keep the stories coming.

you left out mom great story