All Comments on 'A Night in Prague'

by Clea

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
took to long

nice story but too little sex and what there was of it you took to lomg to get to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
A story spoiled

This is a potentially nice little story spoiled by silly mistakes (spelling, grammar, construction). Examples: you write "allot" (to divide or distribute) when you mean "a lot"; you write "to" when it should be "too"; you write "two" when it should be "to". Clea, if you want to be a writer, then you have to get the basics right, otherwise it just makes your work look sloppy and gives an impression that you do not care about it.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous