All Comments on 'A Night Out'

Joan covered her tracks well and I have no doubt she will do Heinz again in the very near future. Well written.

Weire supposed to believe that a supposed loving, faithful wife for all of 18 monts decides to go pick up a stranger to fuck because he husband has an emergency at business and can't be with her on her special night. Also we are to believe that she doesn't even take the time to clean up (dried cum on her face and probably panites) and that just fucked look any husband can spot. She shows up at thouse after gong out without telling her husband dressed like a two bit whore with cum on her face and is worried her husband will see her. Not shit Sherlock, this slut wife is probably one of the dumber sluts on the planet and her guilty morning blow job for her husband isn't going fool the dog catcher. When she calls her new fuck toys number the end of marriage is just a heartbeat away, and so is her reputation.

Continuous stream of ugly dirty words in the telling of an impossible story. Get real!

As stated before seems improbable

1. Just married 18mos and goes from faithful to wanton in one night

2. Her sister-in-law (ie, husband's sister) is there and participating in her cheating?

3. She leaves a bar with another guy without checking in with her husband

4. Comes home worrying about his reaction, but with cum on her face?

5. He's a criminal lawyer as well and going to be prone to suspicion when she didn't reply to message or show up at a reasonable hour.

Just.... sort of poorly thought out.

loser heard from

in stories like this were allowed to have an i.q. that soared into double figures. But maybe that kind of intelligence would be beyond the author of such ridiculous trash. Badly plotted, badly written. 1* is generous.

That was terrible in about any way you look at it! Sounds like it was written by a 2 year old!!!

You need to work on character and plot devolpment also watch your plot if he is a criminal lawer he would notice a load of cum not his own on her face

Writing is not easy. Keep going.

No need to say more. Erotica? That's stretching it.

I can't believe I wasted my time reading this garbage.

This story is no more erotic than a hitting your thumb with a hammer. Badly written, no plot, no character development. Just a foul slut happy to get away with cheating and looking forward to doing it again.

Don't listen to the trolls, while this didn't do a thing for me, don't give up, maybe find someone to work with, bounce ideas off, and improve with time. 3*

close call,,, a couple of you will recall some of these

a confident woman with something to come, left message, something to ruin her situation here, and have ...consequences ...ultimately..be an ex maybe and ...

Her thought I got away with it once, why not many more times...then surprise

Hopefully her husband realizes she is a whore and runs (not walk) away for the whore.

999 stories just like it in LW

Not even a shred of guilt and hubby? Never even seemed concerned that she didnt get home until after he went to sleep? And then she went bed with another mans cum in and on her? Seriously?

Time to get a divorce if she is so unhappy.

It kills me that so many (clearly men) read these and pretend to be angry. And their complaints! Not realistic enough? For a fantasy? Come on! And then the insults, and in one case, fantasies of murder? Silly boys.

While I thought it stretched the believability a little in some details ( she went with her husband to meet the clients family in her red dress?) the sex was hot, the behavior was lewd, and the conclusion was deceptive and sneaky. She hid her lie, the way humans do. You had some clerical issues that could have been corrected, and your sentence structure is sometimes stilted and forced.

But a decent story.

I have an new idea. If Authors as this write Clueless Husband Stories. They (Clueless Husband Story Writers) should write a attention for other Authors to give permision to carry on writting sequal chapter(s) to their Clueless Husband Stories to turn to Revenge Story Direction!!!!!!!!!!!!

@ Remain_in_shadow When I read similar stories, as this is, I think during reading how the original story could be changed to a revenge story. My brain works to that direction. It may be a strange for you, but I dare confess it............I do not know, how others empathy works at reading Clueless Husband Stories, but mine works so........

I am spoilt by Papatoad, SS06, Vulcez, BeerMaker, FrancisMacomber, Azpiri, thecelt, SW_MO_Hermit, coaster2 and others FOREVER!

One can onaly hope the low down dirty cheating cunt gets AIDS and dies a slow miserable lonely death. the husband works his ass off supporting the cunt and she decides to willing get gang fucked. One hopess her husband finds out what a skaky whore she is and divorces the cunt before he catches AIDS from her

I get it. Not my cup of tea of course, but I get it. Many cheaters only do it in their imaginations and, to me, this is harmless escapism. Everyone, including my angry brothers commenting here, have fantasies with partners other than their betrothed. And they always get away with it. Some even have the gall write them down and post them here. You evil wench you.

4*

People it's only a story. I liked parts of it and think the author should keep plugging away with more stories. Probably one or two of the other women should have joined in . That's my only criticism.

Bullshit as usual.

So where is part 2...are you making him a man or a chuck.

Don't pay any attention to the "goody two shoes " mob theres plenty married women out there bored with their boring husbands dragging them down to be as boring as them. I have cheated on my husband plenty of times so I know the buzz that can be had from rushing home after being well and truly shafted knowing you have to hide it from your loving hubby, who lets face it knows your cheating, but prefers to bury his head in the sand rather than face up to his inadequacy. I love going out on the town with friends or if I am really horny go clubbing on my own this has led to threesomes, foursomes, and even moresomes don't knock it girls until you release the inner slut its amazing where it takes you .As you will have worked out already I have no respect for any male because in my experience they are controlling, immature, vulgar, misogynistic, using bastards , who all have the same double standards= don't even look at my wife, sister, or daughter while at the same time regarding all others as fair game possessive pricks.

A talented author but the story is too unrealistic to believe. No intelligent wife would come home without cleaning up and removing the evidence of having sex. Therefore. I rated it 2**.

You need help. Get a shrink. I count my blessing I've never met somebody like you. Why are you married? Story one sided. Erotic? For some maybe who think being a cheating whore makes them special.

She did seem keen to make sure he didn't notice and also got his share of the fun....

Surprised myself by enjoying this.

and i think she did not need 18 months

She cheated on her husband with a lover who had only a 12 cm cock! 12 cm is only 4.7 inches which isn't even average! What was this wife thinking!

so when does jerry find out he is married to a whore and toss the bitch

........ find something else to do with your life.... go suck on a cock.

nwo we have a cuck with a slut wife when does he find out he is married to a whore

When first we practice to become a cheating whore

Whoring slut hope she is caught and dealt with

Joan is sober. She has not been married very long. She obviously doesn't love her husband and wait for it....she doesn't know if he will be awake but comes home with dried cum on her hair and face. Then pushes the issue in the morning? Be better next story...

Joan is neither smart or loving of her husband. Because he has to work, she turns into a slut? Comes home with some cum on her body & hair & still leaking. What is needed is how hubby reacts. Has to be more than what's written; hopefully there'll be another short chapter.

To me, Joan thinks she got away with everything but doesn't realize that her husband smelled her having sex last night when he awoke to her coming in bed & snuggling next to him. He just needed his sleep & will confront her the next day. He was more certain when she was next to him early that morning.

What Joan doesn't know, having smelled everything, when he woke to go to the bathroom during the night, he checked her pockets, pocket book & phone, thereby retrieving the guy's number. When she got up to take a shower, he later got up & saw the wet spot from her pussy leaking the guy's cum. Tearing the sheet around it, he saved it in a baggie. Joan's in for one hell of a surprise when she returns from work.

Decent but not earth moving story, but still, as written, would like a small part 2. 3 stars Bob