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calibeachgirlcalibeachgirlover 11 years ago
It

was nice. thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice, but

Why are you feeding a pregnant woman acohol?

timebomber427timebomber427over 11 years ago
Silly Anon.

D'awww is the only word I can describe this story as.

And Anon, wine in moderation is fine, even recommended, for an expectant mother, so long as a boundary is maintained. Like, for instance, someone saying they're healthy because they're eating ten boxes of Cheerios every day.

flyndanceflyndanceabout 11 years ago
So well written

You've got a fan here..Your writing is so soulful. Keep it up. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

absolutely amazing little story! very well written ! loved it :-D

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Hello there, I am an Indian and also currently living in India. I am an ardent fan and also a voracious reader of romantic fiction. And this is my first attempt at writing erotica. Hopefully, you will enjoy reading my submissions here. Looking forward to your feedback and c...