All Comments on 'A Night with Daddy Ch. 02'

by KellyJames

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Short shorts

What can anyone say?. the story was short and on the verge of, this could never happen. I would think some people get moved or heated up by reading your story however this was not the case for me!. I ask that you keep at it because I see better things coming from your pen..thanks. dan

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Oh Yea !

I loved the "dirty" talk between them , it was sexy and ferocious without being nasty and vulgar . There's nothing quite like telling someone what you want and what you're about to do . Nice work .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hot, but could be hotter with more detail

How was her orgasm? Where did she feel it? Did she have a small one followed by a larger one? How about daddy: where did he feel the urge to cum first? Toes? Lower back? How many times did he spurt?

Don't forget detailing the orgasms and you'll have 5/5. ;)

brianna030292brianna030292almost 13 years ago
fuck that was good!!

OMG!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Daughters!

Daughters make the best little fuck toys!!!

daringgirldaringgirlabout 12 years ago
Wow!

That was perfect from start to finish. I am soaking wet needing more. Please don't stop there. More to come?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love this but I really don’t care for part 3 . Thank you for your story

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