All Comments on 'A Nightmare Encounter'

Not really what I would call sexually hot, or traditionally exciting, but I gotta give it to you. It is original, and pretty well written. Granted you could use an editor, but over all a well written story. Kudos to you you. Five stars.

I enjoyed the story, but I agree with the previous commenter, you would definitely benefit from an editor on this one. Maybe you can find someone on the forums to proof it for you and repost.

It sucked and dude, you are weird.

Good story. A totally different angle and I appreciate it.

This would be better written in perfect present tense

You need an editor badly. This was an overlong mess, and I ended up having to skim it, because wading through the prose made my head hurt.

I'm with the other posters. The concept and flow of the story are EXCELLENT, but it was a very hard read because of the editing. If you ran this through someone to edit for grammar and flow and put it in past tense instead of present tense, it would be outstanding.

Great story! The zombie has no feelings, no remorse, no pity... it simply takes what it wants, over and over and over again! Loved it!

great story, I liked it very much.

But I missed deep french kisses and hot zombie sex a bit ;-)