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"Diolch, cariadd(thanks darling)," Max said lazily.
"Dim problem(no problem)," Red said absent-mindedly, her attention still on the shoes. Then she blushed.
Max raised his blue eyes to her and gave a curious smile.
"Rydych chi yn siarad Cymraeg," he said. "Gallwch fod yn ffrindiau da gyda Bryony. Yn union fel fi a Col."
(You speak Welsh. You can be good friends with Bryony. Like I am with Col.)
"Fwcio!" Red said fiercely. She turned and ran off to the little guest room, Max's mocking panting laughter coming after her.
Col dropped the two cubs right down in the city centre. If it had just been that bastard Max he would've chucked him out at the train station near Bryony's bedsit. He gave Max the benefit of a softly snarled account as to how much he'd make sure Max suffered if Rob didn't make it home that night, which Max listened to with his usual irritating expression of titillated amusement.
Bryony had been very quiet on the drive home, except that she had insisted on stopping off at bloody Asda's to pick up some feminine crap. Col was momentarily hopeful that her period was coming on after all but he couldn't smell any blood on her. He followed her into her bedsit, sniffing anxiously at the scents coming off her. Peaches and cream, muddy pool on a summer's day, sausages and something else he couldn't place, some curious mixed mood she was in. A high mood but not one that suggested he would get his collar off that night. Elation, anxiety. Love.
Foocking women, nothing but trouble, worse than the cubs. He sighed as he sat down on the low futon bed. Bryony put down her handbag. It fell over and a pregnancy tester kit fell out on the floor at his feet.
- COMMENTS
sheabluealmost 10 years agoI love how the characters are being slowly revealed, instead of being spoon fed the generic traits of background characters. All of these characters obviously have a complicated history together ... They are not your average pack. I'm really enjoying getting to know them!
NaokoSmithabout 11 years agoAuthorThe next chapter is coming up soon. It was delayed because I wanted to split off a short section at the start and publish it as a separate chapter - the second longer part is an explicit gay male scene. But the first section was too short to be published as a standalone piece so I've had to edit it back into the longer chapter. If you're not sure whether you like gay male sex, just read the first little section! LOL.
dirksterabout 11 years agoAn ineresting story line with good characters - please don't let this dead-end. I know the lack of feedback can be disheartening, as many writers have stated on the site, but you have fans!
NaokoSmithabout 11 years agoAuthorOh Anonymous, how lovely. I'm so sorry about the delay in publishing chapters. My wonderful editor has had some Real Life happening so she hasn't been able to get back to me with Chapt 4. I think I must look for someone-else. I will be so sorry, she was very good to me.
I have the next five or six chapters lined up so if I can find an editor, it will all start rattling off quickly.
Thank you for your interest!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoAny idea when the next chapter(s) will be posted? Not that I'm eager or anything ...........
