All Comments on 'A Pack of Tales Ch. 11'

So Angharad is red? You need to make this clear and not just put it at the ending. It's so confusing until you get to the last sentence who this and why the name change? It's just too confusing.

Thank you for this helpful comment.

I started writing this series partly as an exercise in learning to write more tightly. I may have overdone it a bit!

I really loved writing the series, but things happened in my Real Life. I found it hard to write well and felt bad about pushing the chapters out in a way I knew wasn't satisfactory.

I am getting back into writing now, and will be back to finish this story although I have some other things I have to do first.