All Comments on 'A Painted Lady'

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caprinecaprinealmost 18 years ago
Top Notch!

Very well done and I loved it!

caprinecaprinealmost 18 years ago
Top Notch!

Very well done and I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Moves too slowly.

This isn't a bad story, but it moves much too slowly and takes far too long to get around to the real action.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
One of the best

I love the way you build and build, your characters individuals who meet at a climax.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Always a good read

Enjoyed the buildup and the sex was realistic and believable. Now if you would only add a chapter to Silk Curtain...

Otto26Otto263 minutes ago

This is an excellent story. The slow build is perfect. The sex is believable, enjoyable, and erotic as hell. I really enjoyed your characterization. Samara was mysterious, confident, and apparently well-adjusted. Thank you for this and I hope to see more of your writing in the future.

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