by Elayne
This isn't a bad story, but it moves much too slowly and takes far too long to get around to the real action.
I love the way you build and build, your characters individuals who meet at a climax.
Enjoyed the buildup and the sex was realistic and believable. Now if you would only add a chapter to Silk Curtain...
This is an excellent story. The slow build is perfect. The sex is believable, enjoyable, and erotic as hell. I really enjoyed your characterization. Samara was mysterious, confident, and apparently well-adjusted. Thank you for this and I hope to see more of your writing in the future.