by Honey123
I thought this story was great! The charachters are beleivable,and the chemistry is exciting, the sex is raw and hot!
I loved it!
This was a really hot story. I liked the way you went smoothly from one person to the other but I noticed that sometimes you seemed to switch tenses. It didn't spoil the story and it was still hot but it was a bit distracting.
Very nice story, which cries out for a sequel. Is Brian going to fuck Anna in the next episode?
I liked this story very much, a nice story line and interesting characters. I'd love to read more about them.
Sailor
This is the hottest of your stories I've read so far. Very well written, and keeps your attention. Super!
This is the first story of yours that I've read and now I want to read more of your stories. Also I'd love to vacation with John and Anna. Very hot write.
BD
WOW!! such an exciting story!! I didn't even realize until I finished I had my hand in my jeans!!
I can't wait to read more of your stories hun!
thank you!
xo
Such a sensual and arousing experience…You are awesome writer…Thanks,
Valdo