All Comments on 'A Picture Is Worth 1000 Words Ch. 05'

This chapter is not the highlight of the series so far; it doesnt't really stand up or stand-out against the others, it doesn't really move the story along, and feels almost rushed, like the author had something better to do, so he just dashed it off. The dialog could be a little clearer at times, but overall well-ish written, just not the attention grabber or grand finale it could have been. Hopefully the next part will be a little more carefully considered and presented.

Goodbye, from both of us! A bottle of red wine, I think. Snicker. Every time your characters speak, I hear Yoda...

Thanks for being such an observant reader. I don't know about other authors, but when they have done it every way I want them to (no anal), it's time to taper off.

As a German Mardi Gras song says: "Everything has an end, only a sausage has two."

Readers of other stories usually lose their interest after more than a few chapters, unless the description promises more, difficult with one-on-one.

A sequel is in the works: "Picture = 1000 words at College"

Fantastic story, loved every bit of it. Well done. Hope to read more just like this one.